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The Circus Dragon's avatar

Wow. I was not expecting that. Firstly this super power + gaming concept is so unique; I've never encountered it before. Secondly, Jeb using it to help others was so heart-warming. I loved all the missions, and I loved how he just keeps thinking and thinking, how can I help them, I want to help more people.

This felt like a warm hug, which I very much needed today. Thanks for writing something so amazing!

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OneMerryWriter aka Arjun S's avatar

The super power + gaming concept, especially with stat points and so on is the core of GameLit or LitRPG.

I picked a bit more of classic fantasy + GameLit approach to the whole thing.

Usually GameLit/LitRPG series are about fighting monsters but I wanted to make it about us, our lives and the times that we live in.

Glad that you loved it.

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The Circus Dragon's avatar

:o oops, I guess I'm pretty new to this genre SO I FOUND IT SO COOL 😂😂

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The Circus Dragon's avatar

Hello! You're one of my nominees for the Sunshine Blogger Award (a peer nomination award) https://open.substack.com/pub/thecircusdragon/p/the-sunshine-what?r=5yb4a7&utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=web&showWelcomeOnShare=true

if you want to check it out.

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OneMerryWriter aka Arjun S's avatar

Thank you for the nomination. I'll respond to it as soon as I can.

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Roads Untraveled's avatar

Great stuff!

There's a lesson here that I think applies more broadly. People should stop looking for jobs and careers, and start looking for a quest - something that gives them purpose and allows their life to be a journey that contributes to others along the way.

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OneMerryWriter aka Arjun S's avatar

Thank you very much for reading and responding. My writing this is an attempt to understand myself and define my purpose while possibly giving a moment or two of joy to others.

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Allen Kwon's avatar

The whole idea of leveling up by helping others, even indirectly, is such a fresh take on the classic ‘gamified life’ concept. Curious to see how rookie ethereal powers change Jeb.

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OneMerryWriter aka Arjun S's avatar

Thank you for reading and the positive words. I hadn't really thought of continuing this but I do have some pointers in my mind as to the direction that things could take.

I am working on a couple of other things right now but in another two weeks I can return to this and see where it takes me.

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Namitha Satheesh's avatar

Beautiful! The last mission was very, very touching. A great combination of real life situations and story!

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OneMerryWriter aka Arjun S's avatar

Thank you. This is a new style of story for me.

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OneMerryWriter aka Arjun S's avatar

Thank you for checking it out. I will have a look at your work.

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